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PostSubject: Red   Sat Dec 31, 2016 10:45 am

A story I wrote for a mock exam for my English teacher to read in August. Miss Elsa (my teacher) loved it. I'm pretty proud of it. Although I'm gonna add some stuff here. Mr. Green

It's a Little Red Riding Hood rewrite.

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I swallowed. "Why hadn't I listened to Mother?" The trees were dense, & the atmosphere got colder as I ventured on.

I picked up the howls of wolves ripping through the thick fog. My free hand clasped my cloak, & the other gripped the handle of my rattan basket. The woods seem to close on me, as the pounding of paws got closer.

"The woods is a dangerous place to play, Red. Don't stray too far from the path!"

Mother's words nagged me over & over again. The fog shrouding my view thinned the slightest bit, but my vision was still unclear. My grip on the handle tightened, so much that my knuckles whitened even more.

Reality was slipping. I could hear their howls, & they were close. I closed my eyes. What would Mother have said.?

"Don't run from the wolves. They sense fear."

Her words were quite useless now. If I don't run, I'll get eaten, & I'd rather show fear than be served on a silver platter.

My feet moved on it's own & I sped down the path. My gleaming red cloak whipped through the wind. The glowing yellow eyes followed me. My breath was coming out as mist, as I panted from running. I'm not an athletic person.

The opening to somewhere was in front of me. The trees were thinning out. I would've shouted for joy, if only I wasn't running. Suddenly, my foot caught on something hard, which I think is a stone, & I tumbled onto the ground. My basket was flung about 5 meters away. I groaned in pain, crouching. My left knee was bleeding.

The wolves appeared, baring their fangs at me. Their yellow eyes pierced through me as I did my best to crawl away from them. No use. Oh dear, what a place to die.

The first one pounced. I braced myself, my arm instinctively flew to cover my head. I waited for the wolves' fangs to sink into my skin, visions of how my limbs would be ripped out swarmed in my mind, but that didn't happen. Instead, I nearly had a heart attack when a gunshot ripped through the air. The sound of boots on the ground brought me to ease, & I lowered my defense.

In front of me lay the first wolf. Dead. The others were growling at me. I inched backwards, only to touch someone's foot.

The hunter had arrived. & he carried the biggest shotgun I had ever seen.

"Step aside, Missy," he said, a lighted cigar in his mouth. I covered my ears & bent forward to duck, as gunshots sounded. Bullet shells were raining down & pelting me. Wolves howled.

"RED!" I heard my Mother. "I told you not to wander off!"




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PostSubject: Re: Red   Sat Dec 31, 2016 6:54 pm

That was really good! It was very detailed and very well described. It got me itching for more. Continue!


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PostSubject: Re: Red   Sun Jan 01, 2017 4:38 am

What? Haha, that's all, unfortunately. It's a one shot, but maybe I will continue it here? I really have no plans for it.




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PostSubject: Re: Red   Sun Jan 01, 2017 4:42 am

I am very easily entertained. haha. I thought it was good. If you want to continue to write it on here. I will be glad to read what you post. Smile


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PostSubject: Re: Red   Sun Jan 01, 2017 4:44 am

Oh thank you!




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PostSubject: Re: Red   Sun Jan 01, 2017 4:47 am

Anytime!


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