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PostSubject: First Winx Fan Fiction   Thu Jun 11, 2015 7:34 pm

Well im going to post my first Winx Club fan fiction here, I will warn ahead of time sometimes I tackle some heavier themes but for the most part I keep it PG Mr. Green . So I hope yall like my stuff and you can rate in review in the comment below I guess?

a few side notes. Italics means a character is talking in their head not out loud. Also I go to college for sports medicine not English, so im very prone to tiny spelling errors. Oh also I should have said I really like paring the girls together even though they have cannon pairings i just find some of them cute.


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PostSubject: Life Bringer Diary Entry   Thu Jun 11, 2015 7:38 pm

Dear Diary

She was the thing that brought me joy, she was exemplary. She has a smile that could light a whole room, and wouldn’t hesitate to protect a single member of the group within a moments notice. She’d probably even take a magical bullet for any one of us. But I was the lucky one to be her roommate. I know i’m always safe because she is always right there just mere steps away. I had nothing more than pure admiration for her beauty, her talent, and strength to lead this whole group flawlessly. She may slip up, but as far as I can see it her sacrifice for the team more than makes up for any of those. She just keeps getting stronger and stronger, and she encourages everyone. I can always hear her cheering us on for lectures. “ Come on girls, we’re the Winx, and there is nothing we can’t do!” She even came up with that name for our group, “The Winx”. It’s pretty amazing what she can do considering what she’s been through. Her planet was frozen solid, and parents died but she still managed to work the hardest to keep everybody else happy. I wish I could just tell her how I felt but, Bloom would never be like that. A princess wants to marry a prince not another princess. Oh what am I even talking about Bloom wouldn’t want to marry me even if I was a prince.  

At that moment Bloom realized she was still awake, “Flora? Why are you still awake?” She approached the troubled fairy. “Are you having trouble sleeping Flora?” Bloom eyed the book, “What’s that Flora?” She attempted to move her hand toward the book, but Flora pulled away quickly. “It’s nothing” she answered, while her face turned red quicker than Bloom could blink. “Oh okay sorry about that Flora.” She brushed her head laughing. “It’s okay sweetie it’s just a book of poems, I like to write when I have trouble falling asleep.” She yawned mid sentence, “speaking of which i’m starting to feel a little tired, I think im going to head to sleep, Greselda’s advanced magic class is tomorrow and it’s already late.” Bloom walked back over to her bed, “Hey Flora you should let me read some of poetry next time, i’ve heard people say your writing is so beautiful.” She yawned quickly again, “Goodnight Flora”, “Goodnight Bloom.” Flora looked off toward the window, “Not as amazing as you are Bloom.” As she smiled and fell asleep.
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PostSubject: Re: First Winx Fan Fiction   Fri Jun 12, 2015 5:38 am

Such a great story! Though, I think you should work more on your grammar. I truly like the introduction of your story! I wanna see more! Wink I could have never though of that. No


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PostSubject: Re: First Winx Fan Fiction   Fri Jun 12, 2015 5:44 am

What so about my grammar? Like I said I'm a pre-med student not english lol! so I'd have to have people tell me if I make little, Symantec errors. Though attention to aesthics is important. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: First Winx Fan Fiction   Fri Jun 12, 2015 10:20 am

Just some minor errors... Like, some punctuation marks are missing. Also, you can put commas and separate this sentence, to show their expressions well. Mr. Green
Oh okay sorry about that Flora.
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Oh, okay! Sorry about that, Flora.


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PostSubject: Re: First Winx Fan Fiction   Fri Jul 24, 2015 6:25 am

Really nice story. Good work. I love it!


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PostSubject: Re: First Winx Fan Fiction   Fri Jul 24, 2015 3:12 pm

Fairy cool (See what I did there?) I wonder if theres gonna be more.
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PostSubject: Re: First Winx Fan Fiction   Fri Jul 24, 2015 4:21 pm

I hope there will be more.


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PostSubject: Re: First Winx Fan Fiction   Sat Oct 24, 2015 2:36 pm

Aww!~ Please update this! This is fairy cool! Wink & Raspberry


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PostSubject: Re: First Winx Fan Fiction   Sat Oct 31, 2015 6:17 pm

I need more of this story!

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